Monday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
1.We need to alert at the crosswalk, because some cars are driving without rules.>>CORRECTOR>>We need to be alert at the crosswalk, because some cars are driving carelessly.
2.We need to saved the Earth, Earth gives us fresh air.>>We need to save the Earth because it gives us fresh air.
3.I want to go to playground, but I need to get allow from my mother first.>>I want to go to the playground but, I need to ask for permission from my mother first.
4.Audience are amazed because of pianist\'s perfect playing.>>Audience are amazed because of the pianist\'s perfect performance.
5.We are answer when someone ask something.>>We answer when someone asks us something.
6.We arrived to our house from long journey.>>We arrived to our house from a long journey. 7.At morning, owels are sleeping but people are awake.>>In the morning, owls are sleeping but people are awake.
8.We get award when we work.>>CORRECTOR>>We receive award when we work.
9.That view was super awesome.>>CORRECTOR>>That view was so awesome. 10.My parents are working always without weekends and holiday.>>My parents are always working except weekends and holiday. 11.We need to avoid dangereous things.>>We need to avoid dangerous things.
Very good, Claire.- T. Melody ^^
2.We need to saved the Earth, Earth gives us fresh air.>>We need to save the Earth because it gives us fresh air.
3.I want to go to playground, but I need to get allow from my mother first.>>I want to go to the playground but, I need to ask for permission from my mother first.
4.Audience are amazed because of pianist\'s perfect playing.>>Audience are amazed because of the pianist\'s perfect performance.
5.We are answer when someone ask something.>>We answer when someone asks us something.
6.We arrived to our house from long journey.>>We arrived to our house from a long journey. 7.At morning, owels are sleeping but people are awake.>>In the morning, owls are sleeping but people are awake.
8.We get award when we work.>>CORRECTOR>>We receive award when we work.
9.That view was super awesome.>>CORRECTOR>>That view was so awesome. 10.My parents are working always without weekends and holiday.>>My parents are always working except weekends and holiday. 11.We need to avoid dangereous things.>>We need to avoid dangerous things.
Very good, Claire.- T. Melody ^^
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