Monday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
That\'s a wonderful idea. I used to wonder if Tarzan was real too. Haha. It would be cool if he was. Thanks for doing your homework today. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
I like adventure if it is safe because I like to experience something new.
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If I can have adventure now, I want to visit jungle.
>> If I can go on an adventure now, I want to visit the jungle.
I read \'Tarzan\' and I want to visit jungle just like Tarzan live.
>>I read \'Tarzan\' and I want to visit the jungle just like where Tarzan lives.
But I know there is no Tarzan because Tarzan is made with imagination.
>>CORRECT!
But no one knows. What if there is Tarzan?
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I also want to see strange plants, like venus fly traps.
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Because I want to see venus fly traps are eating flies.
>>It\'s because I want to see Venus fly traps eating flies.
And there must be many unknown creatures.
>>CORRECT!
Someday maybe I can visit jungle.
>>CORRECT!
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