Monday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Thank you for making your homework for Monday! As always, it\'s very fun to read! Keep up the great work. <3
~~Teacher Kate
My favorite traditional food is rice cake.
>>CORRECT!
Because there are so many kind of yummy rice cakes and they are sweet.
>>CORRECT!
It is not too much sweet, so it\'s very delicious.
>>It\'s not too sweet so it\'s very delicious.
Rice cakes are also traditional dessert in Korea.
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I know the recipe that teach us how to easily make rice cake at home.
>>I learned the easiest recipe to make rice cakes at home.
First, we need glutinous rice then we just need to make dough out of it.
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If we put some sugar or salt, then it is ready rice cakes.
>>If we put some sugar or salt, then the rice cakes are ready to eat.
I try this at home, when my mom gives me glutinous rice.
>>CORRECT!
Also when we ate rice cakes or something sticky before the test, korean thought they got a success.
>>Also, Koreans believe that when we eat rice cakes or something sticky before a test, we will get a good score.
Because in Korea, people say when we get all correct in test, they didn\'t said pass but they said sticks to test.
>>In Korea, when we get a perfect score, they don\'t consider a passing score but refer to it as \"sticks\" in a test.
But all people didn\'t use this expression but every koreans are know this expression.
>>However, not all people use this expression but all Koreans know it.
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