Monday homework
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Claire\'s homework
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Hello Claire!
Thank you for making your Monday homework! See you in class tomorrow. ^^
~~Teacher Kate
I think world would better if everybody used same language.
>>CORRECT!
Because everyone in the world can communicate easily and everyone would not get lost when they traveling other countries.
>>It\'s because everyone in the world can communicate easily and everyone would not get lost when they are traveling to other countries.
Also everyone can make more friends.
>>CORRECT!
Sometimes people use other language so they can’t communicate each other and that’s why they can’t be the friend.
>>Sometimes people use other languages so they can’t communicate with each other and that’s why they can’t be friends.
But we can make more friends when all people use same language.
>>CORRECT!
I think the bad point is they are all same and they can’t make new cultures so that could be the problem if everybody use the same language.
>>I think the bad point is that they are all the same and they can’t make new cultures so that could be the problem if everybody uses the same language.
If everyone has same culture there is no reason to travel around the world.
>>If everyone has the same culture there is no reason to travel around the world.
Travelers want to experience new cultures or traditional things from other countries but there is nothing traditional language or something like that will disappear slowly but clearly.
>>Travelers want to experience new cultures or traditional things from other countries but if there is no traditional language, something like that will disappear slowly but surely.
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