Monday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Thank you for making your homework for last week! You did a lot haha. Great job Claire. See you in class ^^
~~Teacher Kate
My best social networking site is YouTube.
>>CORRECT!
Because these days I always watch YouTube video when I’m bored and nothing to do.
>>it\'s because these days I always watch YouTube videos when I’m bored and have nothing to do.
This networking site is not only need for fun.
>>This networking site is not only used for fun.
I always watch English video and I think it support me when I has to study English but I don’t want to do.
>>I always watch English video and I think it supports me when I have to study English but I don’t want to do it.
I think the YouTube videos help me from listening skills and the words we use in real life.
>>I think the YouTube videos help me improve my listening skills and the words I use in real life.
In Korea the first job that kids want to have when they grow up is YouTuber.
>>In Korea the first job that kids want to have when they grow up is to be a YouTuber.
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