Monday Homework
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Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
This is another very nice composition. Thank you for your efforts. See you in class! ^^
~~teacher Kate
Helping the people is good when they ask us for a favor.
>>Helping people is good when they ask us for a favor.
Helping each other is not tired at all but it makes the world better.
>>Helping each other is not tiring at all and it makes the world better.
Usually people ask for a small help that we can help easily.
>>Usually people ask for a small favor that we can easily help them with.
But sometimes some people is asks for a big help that we can’t help for.
>>But sometimes some people asks for big favors that we can’t help with.
For example “please lend me some money” or I have only one ice cream but someone ask for an ice cream.
>>For example “please lend me some money” or if I have only one ice cream cone/cup and someone is asking for it.
In this situation I refuse their requests.
>>CORRECT!
Helping other people is good but only in the limit that we can help.
>>Helping other people is good but there should be a limit.
If we learn how to help then we need to learn how to refuse.
>>CORRECT!
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