Monday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
Wow! your composition today was very interesting to read. Thanks for your efforts! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
If that kind of chance is given to me I want to study in Germany or America.
>>CORRECT!
Sometimes I want to work in the place about selling many kinds of candies and caramels.
>>Sometimes I want to work in a place that sells many kinds of candies and caramels.
And Germany is famous with candy so there must be many candy stores and factories to work.
>>And Germany is famous for its candy so there must be many candy stores and factories to work in there.
In America I want to work as police.
>>CORRECT!
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