Monday Homework
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Claire\'s homework
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Hello Claire!
Oh Yes, I remember you telling me about this. I hope this allergy would disappear as you grow up. I had egg allergies before too and with some seafood. But it disappeared when I became an adult. See you tomorrow in class. ^^
~~Teacher Kate
I have chocolate allergies.
>>CORRECT!
Not only the dark chocolate also the white chocolate.
>>Not only with dark chocolate but also with white chocolate.
First time I tasted Kinder chocolate, I had a small itchy spots everywhere on my body.
>>The first time I tasted Kinder Joy chocolate, I had small itchy spots everywhere on my body.
My chocolate allergies didn’t have a serious affect to my health or living.
>>My chocolate allergies didn’t seriously affect my health or living.
But so sad that I can eat small chocolate piece during the special days.
>>But it\'s so sad that I can only eat small pieces of chocolate on the special days.
I can’t taste Kinder chocolate even during special days.
>>I can’t eat Kinder chocolate even on special days.
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