Monday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Claire\'s homework
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
This is such a beautiful composition! I wanted to cry while reading. You are such a sweet girl! Most of the sentences are also correct! Keep up the good work.
~~Teacher Kate
I’m very grateful to my parents and my friends.
>>CORRECT!
My parents gave birth to me so I could bear in this world.
>>My parents gave birth to me so I could live in this world.
If my parents didn’t give birth to me then I won’t exist in this world.
>>CORRECT!
I think it’s the most important and grateful luck in my whole life.
>>I think it’s important to be grateful for the luck I have in my whole life.
If I wasn’t born, I won’t meet my parents, teachers, friends, and more people that I met.
>>CORRECT!
I need to thanks for friends too.
>>I need to be thankful for friends too.
They played with me and enjoyed it with me.
>>CORRECT!
I love them very much.
>>CORRECT!
Also, they encouraged me and they cheered me up when I’m tired.
>>CORRECT!
I’m grateful for everyone and proud of everybody.
>>CORRECT!
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