Monday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:What is your favorite pet?
A:My favorite pet is axolotle.
First, axolotle is very cute.
Second, axolotle is living in water so I can clean its aquarium easy.
Third, I like what it\'s looks like and it has no fur.
Fourth, I know many things about axolotles feature or where they lives
so I think I can breed them well.
But, it is Endangered animal so I can\'t breed it with out permit.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! The good thing is you always put details in your homework! Great job!
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~Teacher Sheila
>>My favorite pet is axolotl.
First, axolotle is very cute.
>>First, axolotl is very cute.
Second, axolotle is living in water so I can clean its aquarium easy.
>>Second, axolotl is living in the water so I can clean its aquarium easily.
Third, I like what it\'s looks like and it has no fur.
>>Third, I like what it looks like and it has no fur.
Fourth, I know many things about axolotles feature or where they lives
>>Fourth, I know many things about axolotls\' features or whey they live.
so I think I can breed them well.
>>CORRECT
But, it is Endangered animal so I can\'t breed it with out permit.
>>But, it is an endangered animal so I can\'t breed it without a permit.
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