Monday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:How do you show respect to other people?
A:I show respect to other people by do polite to other people or say \"Hi\" when I meet other people.
First, our country\'s people do anything special to show respect to other people or I don\'t know it.
Second, I don\'t know many things about how to show respect to other people or respect.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Good job!
~Teacher Sheila
>>I show respect to other people by being polite and saying \"Hi\" when I meet other people.
OR>>I show respect to other people by being polite and by greeting them.
First, our country\'s people do anything special to show respect to other people or I don\'t know it.
>>CORRECT
OR>>First, Koreans have their own special way of showing respect to other people through bowing.
Second, I don\'t know many things about how to show respect to other people or respect.
>>CORRECT
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.