Monday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:How do you like to spend your time?
A:I like to spend my time by listen to musics or programming.
First, my best hobby is listening music so I like to spend my time by listening to musics.
Second, I like to programming in the computer so I like to spend my time by programming something.
Last, I like to spend my time by reading books about animals,
because if I read books about animals, I feel fun and I can get more information about animals.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Great job!
~Teacher Sheila
I like to spend my time by listen to musics or programming.
>>I like to spend my time by listening to music or doing programming.
First, my best hobby is listening music so I like to spend my time by listening to musics.
>>First, my best hobby is listening to music so I like to spend my time by listening to music.
Second, I like to programming in the computer so I like to spend my time by programming something.
>>Second, I like doing programming on the computer.
Last, I like to spend my time by reading books about animals,
>>CORRECT
because if I read books about animals, I feel fun and I can get more information about animals.
>>CORRECT
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