Monday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:What\'s the best thing about having friends?
A:The best things about having friends are I can tell my stories and friendship.
First, if I can tell my stories, then they will listen to my story and sympathy to me.
Second, if friends and I have friendship, I can sympathy to them and they can sympathy to me.
Last, if we have friendship, then we can talk about animals ore other things.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! Great work!
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
First, if I can tell my stories, then they will listen to my story and sympathy to me.
>>First, if I can tell my stories then they will listen to me and sympathize with me.
Second, if friends and I have friendship, I can sympathy to them and they can sympathy to me.
>>Second, if friends and I have a great friendship, I can sympathize and vice versa.
Last, if we have friendship, then we can talk about animals ore other things.
>>Last, if we have a good friendship then we can talk about animals or other things.
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