Monday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q:What are the damages done by the pandemic in your family?
A:The damages done by the pandemic in my family is we can\'t go outside many times.
First, we can\'t go outside so we can\'t active many times.
Second, we can\'t go outside so we have to celebrate our birthday in our house.
Last, we can\'t go outside so we can\'t go school many times, so we have to do online calsses.
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Q: What are the damages done by the pandemic in your family?
A: The damages done by the pandemic in my family is we can\'t go outside many times.
>>> CORRECT
OR: One of the damages done by the pandemic in my family is we can\'t go outside a lot of times.
First, we can\'t go outside so we can\'t active many times.
>>> First, we can\'t go outside so we can\'t do activities outside and it\'s limited.
Second, we can\'t go outside so we have to celebrate our birthday in our house.
>>> Second, we can\'t go outside so we have to celebrate our birthdays and other special events inside our house.
Last, we can\'t go outside so we can\'t go school many times, so we have to do online calsses.
>>> Lastly, we can\'t go outside so we can\'t go to school every day, so we have to do online classes.
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