Monday homework
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Q:What foods are you going to put on your menu?
A:I\'ll put some kinds of meat, rice, and some side dishes on my menu.
First, our family eat rice every day, so if there\'s no rice, then it feels empty so I\'ll put rice on my menu.
Second, we have to eat meats for getting proteins, so I\'ll put some meats on my menu.
Last, I\'ll put some side dishes on my menu because, if there are only rice and meat, then it feels empty too.
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Q: What foods are you going to put on your menu?
A: I\'ll put some kinds of meat, rice, and some side dishes on my menu.
>>> I\'ll put different kinds of meat, rice and some side dishes on my menu.
First, our family eat rice every day, so if there\'s no rice, then it feels empty so I\'ll put rice on my menu.
>>> First, our family eats rice every day, so if there\'s no rice, then it will feel empty so I\'ll definitely put rice on my menu.
Second, we have to eat meats for getting proteins, so I\'ll put some meats on my menu.
>>> Second, we have to eat meat for us to get the nutrient such as protein, so I\'ll put meat dishes on my menu.
Last, I\'ll put some side dishes on my menu because, if there are only rice and meat, then it feels empty too.
>>> Lastly, I\'ll put some side dishes on my menu because, if it contains only rice and meat, then it will feel empty as well.
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