Monday homework

2021-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:Read the folktale “The Queen Swallow’s Gift” and tell me the story on Monday. Narrate it to me. A:\"The queen swallow\'s gift\" story is there was a man named Heungbu and he was poor. He saw a swallow was hurt. So he cured the swallow. Few days after, the swallow came back to Heungbu\'s house, and the swallow gave a gourd to Heungbu. And Heungbu opened the gourd, and there was a lot of gold in the gourd. So he became a rich in the future.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


\"The queen swallow\'s gift\" story is there was a man named Heungbu and he was poor.

>> \"The Queen Swallow\'s gift\" is a story about a poor man named Heungbu.
He saw a swallow was hurt. So he cured the swallow.

>> He saw a swallow and it was hurt, so he cured the swallow.

Few days after, the swallow came back to Heungbu\'s house, and the swallow gave a gourd to Heungbu.

>> A few days after, the swallow came back to Heungbu\'s house and the swallow gave a gourd to Heungbu.
And Heungbu opened the gourd, and there was a lot of gold in the gourd.

>> Heungbu opened the gourd and there was a lot of gold inside the gourd.
So he became a rich in the future.

>> So he became a rich man in the future.



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