Monday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I already achieved my goal by getting 100 stamps from my parents.

>> CORRECT!

OR

>> I already achieved one of my goals of getting 100 stamps from my parents.
First, I can get a stamp when I get perfect score from my test paper.

>> I can get a stamp when I get a perfect score on my test paper.
Second, I\'ve get 100 stamps in a lot of times, and I can get a lego bricks when I get 100 stamps from my parents.

>> If I get 100 stamps a lot of times then I can get Lego bricks from my parents.