Monday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I\'m not sure things that people do in Facebook, but I think they share their situation in Facebook.

>> I\'m not sure about the things that people do on Facebook, but I think they share their situations on Facebook.
Firstly, if I use Facebook and if I share something bad, and if I regret it, then I\'ll delete it from the program, but I can\'t delete it from the user\'s brain, so it will be not that good.

>> First of all, If I use Facebook and share something bad and regret it after, then I\'ll delete it but I can\'t delete it from other users\' brains so that won\'t be good.
Secondly, the Facebook users can say something good to me but, they can say something bad, then I\'ll feel bad, so it isn\'t good thing for me.

>> Secondly, other Facebook users can say something good to me but they can also say something bad which would make me feel bad and that isn\'t a good thing for me.
Also, they can use slang in Facebook, so it can give children bad effects, so it should not be used by children.

>> Also, they can use slang words on Facebook so it can have a bad effect on children so it shouldn\'t be used by children.