Monday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

My best memory from school is when I went field experience learning with my best friend.

>> My best memory from school is when I went on a field experience learning with my best friend.
First, it\'s because I played with my friend when I came back to my home and it was very fun.

>> First of all, it\'s because I played with my friend when I came back home and it was very fun.
Second, their was a lot of different species of animals, so I could look at them with my friend.

>> Second is there were a lot of different species of animals, so I could look at them with my friend.
Also, me and my friend talked many things in the bus, so I could know more things about animals.

>>  Also, my friend and I talked about many things on the bus so I was able to know more about animals.