Monday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

Solving English problems was my favorite way to practice English, but now video class is my favorite way to practice English.

>> Solving English problems was my favorite way to practice English, but now video classes are my favorite way to practice English.
First, I can\'t get feedback if I solve English problems, but if I do video class, then I can get feedback.

>> First of all, I can\'t get feedback if I solve English problems, but if I do video classes then I can receive feedback.
Second, if I solve English problems, then I can\'t know how people originally say in English, but I can know that if I do video class.

>> Second, I can\'t know how people originally say English words with solving English problems, but I am able to know that if I do video classes.
Lastly, if I do video class, then I can see my teachers\' face and it\'s more friendly.

>> Lastly, if I do video classes, then I can see my teachers\' face and it\'s more friendly.