Monday homework

Claire

Hello Claire!

Good job with your compositions! This was so scary though haha. I hope you will only have good dreams from now on. ^^

~~Teacher Kate

I had a lot of nightmares since I was a baby.

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But the worst one, I will tell you.

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First, in the dream, it was night and I was riding a roller coaster alone.

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Every ride was empty and stopped moving.

>>Every ride was empty and wasn\'t moving.

There were no seat belts in the roller coaster seats.

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Second, I didn\'t want to ride it but the roller coaster started to move.

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And I could saw a clown who has a knife with blood and the clown.

>>And I could see a clown who has a knife with blood and the clown.

There were several children running away from the clown.

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And the clown was really fast he killed the kids one by one by piercing them with a sharp knife.

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By a kid dies he ate the half-dead body of the kid and the kid was screaming desperately.

>>When a kid died, he ate the half-dead body of the kid and the kid was screaming desperately.

Every kid was eaten by the clown.

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The roller coaster was going up and up.

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Third, suddenly the clown looked up at the roller coaster I was riding.

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The clown didn\'t move for a while even without blinking.

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Fourth, the clown came up on the rail and hang its hand to the seat.

>>Fourth, the clown came up on the rail and hang its hand on the seat.

For a moment it waved the knife on the air.

>>For a moment, it waved a knife in the air.

The clown looked like an Mc Donald\'s symbol clown.

>>The clown looked like McDonald\'s mascot. 

The clown\'s knife pierced my neck and the roller coaster was falling from the highest part of the rail.

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I wasn\'t screaming I saw my blood dripping from the roller coaster seat.

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Dream ends.

>>This is where the dream ends.