Monday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think happy moments and I listen to good or cheerful music or I do something I want to do.

>> I think about happy moments and I listen to good or cheerful music or I do something that I want to do.
First, if I think about happy moments, then I feel better, so I think happy moments when I\'m sad.

>> First of all, if I think about happy moments then I will feel better, so I think about happy moments when I\'m sad.
Second, if I listen to good or cheerful music, then I feel better then before, so I listen to good or cheerful music.

>> Second, if I listen to good or cheerful music then I feel better than before, so I listen to good or cheerful music.
Lastly, if I do something I want to do, then I feel good so I do something what I want to do.

>> Lastly, if I do something that I want to do then I will feel good, so I do it.