Monday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think I will not live in a retirement home.

>> CORRECT!
Because, I think I will like my home better then retirement home, so I think I\'ll not live in there.

>> I think I will like my home better than a retirement home, so I think I will not live there.
And I think I can\'t do something that I want to do, so I think I will live in my home.

>> I think I can\'t also do the things that I want to do so I would rather live in my home.
Actually, I can change my mind later, but I think staying at my home is better then living in a retirement home now.

>> Actually, I can change my mind in the future but for now, I think staying at my home is better than living in a retirement home.