Monday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think being good to other people or being kind makes someone beautiful.

>> CORRECT!
Actually, I\'m not sure about it because I don\'t care about it, but I think good people or kind people would look beautiful.

>> Actually, I\'m not sure about it because I don\'t care much about it, but I think good or kind people look beautiful.
Also, even if people look beautiful, their mind can not be good so, people need to know their mind not their exterior.

>> Also, even if people look beautiful but their mind is not, they need to focus more on their thoughts and not their exterior.