Monday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

If the shop assistants try it once, it does not annoy me, but if they do that many times, then it annoys me.

>> If the shop assistants try it once, it does not annoy me, but if they do it more than once, then it annoys me.
I know they tries that because if I buy more things, then they can earn more money.

>> I know they do that because if I buy more things, then they can earn more money.
But if I don\'t like that thing I will say I\'ll not buy it,

>> If I don\'t like that thing I\'ll say I will not buy it.

but if the shop assistant try that again, it will be annoying.

>> But if the shop assistant tries that again, it will be annoying.