Monday homework

2021-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:If you\'re going to have a party, where would you like to have it? A:I\'ll have a party at my house. Firstly, I don\'t like go out and stay there for a long time except when I\'m looking at some animals. And I don\'t like inviting many friends or people, so I would like to have a party at my home.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:

I\'ll have a party at my house.
>> CORRECT!
Firstly, I don\'t like go out and stay there for a long time except when I\'m looking at some animals.
>> Firstly, I don\'t like going out and staying out for a long time, except when I\'m looking at some animals.
And I don\'t like inviting many friends or people, so I would like to have a party at my home.
>> Second, I don\'t like inviting many friends or people, so I would like to have a party at my home.

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