Monday homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I think I encourage me the most, and my parents encourage me the second.
>> CORRECT!
I know me the best in the world and I live my life so I need to encourage myself,
>> I know me the best in the world and I\'m the one living my life so I need to encourage myself.
and I encourage me by saying \'It\'s okay.\' in my mind.
>> I encourage myself by saying, \"It\'s okay\", in my mind.
Also, my parents mad me born, so they encourage me the second,
>> Also, my parents gave birth to me, so they encourage me the second.
and they encourage me by saying good things to me.
>> They encourage me by saying good things to me.
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