Monday homework

2021-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:What are some countries that you would never visit? Why would you not visit them? A:At now, I don\'t want to go to some countries having war now. If I go to some countries having war now, then I can be hurt so I don\'t want to go there. But, if there are no war, then I don\'t have countries that I would never visit.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


At now, I don\'t want to go to some countries having war now.

>> Right now,  I don\'t want to go to some countries having a war.
If I go to some countries having war now, then I can be hurt so I don\'t want to go there.

>> If I go to some countries currently at war, then I can be hurt so I don\'t want to go there.
But, if there are no war, then I don\'t have countries that I would never visit.

>> But if there are no wars, then I don\'t have countries that I would never visit.

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