Monday homework

2022-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:Can you talk about three things you like about yourself? A:I like that I\'m able to live and I can eat many foods and I can see many things. Actually, these things are natural thing but some people can\'t do one of these three. If I\'m not able to live, then I can\'t think or do something. If I can\'t eat anything then I don\'t know what\'s taste and I\'ll die in five days. Lastly, if I can\'t see anything then I can\'t know what\'s color or object, and it will be hard to live.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I like that I\'m able to live and I can eat many foods and I can see many things.

>> I like that I\'m able to live, I can eat many kinds of food, and I can see many things.
Actually, these things are natural thing but some people can\'t do one of these three.

>> Actually, these are normal things but some people might not be able do any one of these three things.
If I\'m not able to live, then I can\'t think or do something.

>> CORRECT!
If I can\'t eat anything then I don\'t know what\'s taste and I\'ll die in five days.

>> If I can\'t eat anything, then I don\'t know what is taste and I\'ll die in five days.
Lastly, if I can\'t see anything then I can\'t know what\'s color or object, and it will be hard to live.

>> Lastly, if I can\'t see anything, then I can\'t know what is a color or the kinds of objects around me, and it will be hard to live.

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