Monday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think a half or less people are very happy in our country.

>> I think half of the population or less are very happy in our country.
A lot of students get stressed because they need to go a lot of academies and they have a lot of homework.

>> A lot of students get stressed because they need to go to a lot of academies and they have a lot of homework.
Also, I think many people get stressed when they are at work

>> Also, I think many people get stressed when they are at work.