Monday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I prefer winter vacations.

>> CORRECT!
Winter vacations are usually longer then summer vacations, and New Year begins while winter vacation.

>> Winter vacations are usually longer then summer vacations, and a new year begins during winter vacation.
Also, I don\'t like hot weather, and I can get a new mind.

>> Also, I don\'t like hot weather and I can get a renewed mind during this time.