Monday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The most memorable school trip was a trip that I\'ve been three or four years ago.

>> The most memorable school trip was a trip that I\'ve been in three or four years ago.
I made a bowl, and the lunch that my mom cooked was Kim-bob and it was very delicious.

>> CORRECT!
When I was in forth grade, sixth grade students went to amusement park, but I didn\'t go school trip at sixth grade, so I felt a kind of sad.

>> When I was in the fourth grade, the sixth grade students went to an amusement park, but I didn\'t go to the school trip at sixth grade, so I felt kind of sad.