Monday homework

2022-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:Can you tell me about something you would happily do again? A:If I can, I want to go back to first grade. When I was in first grade of elementary school, I was so naive and kind. Also, I\'ve never do anything wrong to my parents when I was in first grade.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


If I can, I want to go back to first grade.

>> If I can, I want to go back to the first grade.
When I was in first grade of elementary school, I was so naive and kind.

>> When I was in the first grade of elementary school, I was so naive and kind.
Also, I\'ve never do anything wrong to my parents when I was in first grade.

>> Also, I\'ve never done anything wrong to my parents when I was in the first grade.

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