Monday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think computer and phones make our lives easier.

>> I think computers and phones make our lives easier.
By using computer and phone, we can find information faster then before.

>> By using computers and phones, we can find information faster than before.
Also, they made us to communicate, share our situation, and having fun easier.

>> Also, it allows us to communicate, share our situation, and have fun easier.