Monday homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think it should be less then 2 hours.

>> I think it should be less than 2 hours.
2 hours are already a long time to play video games, so I think they shouldn\'t play it more then 2 hours.

>> 2 hours is already a long time to play video games, so I think they shouldn\'t play it for more than 2 hours.
Also, if kids play a video game for a long time, then it\'s not good for their eyes\', body\'s, and mental\'s health.

>> Also, if kids play a video game for a long time, then it\'s not good for their eyes, body, and mental health.