Monday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

One of the important changes is that I don\'t be shy now.

>> One of the important changes is that I am not shy anymore.
Also, one of the changes is that I think more philosophical, and logical.

>> Also, one of the changes is that I think more philosophically and logically.
I think the way that I think and the way that I treat other people is important in my life.

>>  CORRECT!