Monday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The time that I was happiest is three years ago.

>> The time that I was the happiest was three years ago.
I lost a way back, and I met a dog there, so I was scared.

>> I lost my way and I met a dog so I was scared.
So, I ran fast and when I was safe, I was happy because I was alive.

>> I ran fast and when I was already safe, I was happy because I was alive.