Monday Homework

2022-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Q:What can you say about your friends and what are friends for? A:I can say my friends are good, and they are for all of us\'s happiness. If my friends are not good, then I won\'t let them to be my friends. Also, if a person thinks his or her friends are only for him or her happiness, then I think it\'s hard to say friends.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I can say my friends are good, and they are for all of us\'s happiness.

>> I can say my friends are good and they all want us to be happy.
If my friends are not good, then I won\'t let them to be my friends.

>> CORRECT!
Also, if a person thinks his or her friends are only for him or her happiness, then I think it\'s hard to say friends.

>> Also, if a person thinks his or her friends are only for his or her own happiness, then I think it\'s hard to say they are their friends.

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