Monday Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think pets are good for a person\'s health.

>> CORRECT!
Usually, people keep their pets because they want a companion for their life.

>> Usually, people keep their pets because they want a companion in their life.
Sometimes people can be annoyed because of their pets, but I think pets can keep people\'s health good in many ways.

>> CORRECT!
For instant, people can be healthy by taking a walk with their pets.

>> For instance, people can be healthy by taking a walk with their pets.