Monday Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I can eat meals faster than eating them in a restaurant.
>> I can eat meals faster at home than eating them in a restaurant.
My parents usually cook meals before about thirty minutes from meal, so I can eat meals instantly.
>> My parents usually cook our meals about thirty minutes before, so I can eat my meals instantly.
Not all of the times, but usually restaurants cook well than our house.
>> Not all of the time, but usually, food cooked at restaurants are better than food cooked in our house.
But, my home is more comfortable, so I like here more.
>> But my home is more comfortable so I like it here more.
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