Monday Homework

2023-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

Q: What can people do to help reduce pollution? A: I think people could eat all the dishes when they have meals. I think many people don\'t eat all when they have meals, so a lot of food wastes are produced after their meals. Also, people can use recycling things to prevent pollutions.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think people could eat all the dishes when they have meals.

>> I think people should eat all the dishes when they have meals.
I think many people don\'t eat all when they have meals, so a lot of food wastes are produced after their meals.

>> I think a lot of people don\'t eat everything on their plates when they have meals, so a lot of food wastes are produced after their meals.
Also, people can use recycling things to prevent pollutions.

>> Also, people can use recycled things to prevent pollution.

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