Monday Homework
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Q: What are the best and worst things about being wealthy?
A: I think the best thing about being wealthy is I can do a lot of things that I want to.
If I have a lot of money, I can do almost everything that I want to do, so I can live happily if I want to.
And I think the worst thing about being wealthy is the person can be arrogant.
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A: I think the best thing about being wealthy is I can do a lot of things that I want to.
If I have a lot of money, I can do almost everything that I want to do, so I can live happily if I want to.
And I think the worst thing about being wealthy is the person can be arrogant.
If I have a lot of money, I can do almost everything that I want to do, so I can live happily if I want to.
And I think the worst thing about being wealthy is the person can be arrogant.
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