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Q) If you were given one million dollars to spend how would you spend it? You cannot use it for yourself, family members, or friends. Discuss your ideas in an essay of 200 words. Support your ideas with reasons and examples. A) If I had one million dollars, I would spend it on three parts. First, I would donate 0.1 million dollars to my highschool. The teachers in there helped me sincerly when I had hard time in high school period. And I really appreciate them. I want to do something for them. If they got 0.1 million, they can change their chairs, table, and computers. And all kinds of things will be renewed. So students in there will have better walfare and teachers can teach them in a better environment. Second, I would help my father doing his job. He made a book recently. The book's name is 'Serve the citizen' It is about a way of great president. He made it ardently and spent 6 months for making it. And for making it, there is 20 years studying behind it. (continued...)

[이름], Thank you for redoing your homework.This time, you were able able to answer the questons. Please have time to read my corrections. T.Sheela Q) If you were given one million dollars to spend how would you spend it? You cannot use it for yourself, family members, or friends. Discuss your ideas in an essay of 200 words. Support your ideas with reasons and examples.A) If I had one million dollars, I would spend it on three parts. >> If I have a one million dollars, I would spend it on three parts. First, I would donate 0.1 million dollars to my highschool. >> Correct! The teachers in there helped me sincerly when I had hard time in high school period. >>Correct! >>>>The teachers in there helped me sincerly when I had a hard during my high school years. And I really appreciate them. >>Correct! I want to do something for them. >> Correct! If they got 0.1 million, they can change their chairs, table, and computers. >> If they have 0.1 million, they can change their chairs, table, and computers. And all kinds of things will be renewed. >> Correct! >>And all kinds of things will be renovated. So students in there will have better walfare and teachers can teach them in a better environment. >> Correct! (except for the spelling of welfare not walfare) >>OR So students in there will have better welfare and teachers can teach them in a good environment. Second, I would help my father doing his job. >> Secondly, I would help my father do his job. He made a book recently. >>Recently, he is making a book. The book\'s name is \'Serve the citizen\' It is about a way of great president. >> The book\'s title is, \"Serve the citizen\", it is about a way of being a great president. He made it ardently and spent 6 months for making it. >>Correct! >>OR He made it ardently and spend 6 months making it. And for making it, there is 20 years studying behind it. >> And for making it, he spend 20 years studying for it. >>Behind the book was a 20 years of study before making it. (continued...) >>(To be continued...)