monday homework2
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But books were distributed only one thousands to the public. Because he didn't have lots of money to publish it. So If I gave him about 0.3 million dollars, he would invest it to his book, so publisher could advertise the book in the newspaper or in the subway. And of course he can distribute many books of it. And it will be sold more than before.
Third, I wanna give 0.7 million dollars to publisher who deals with classic books like Kant, Rawls, Socratas and so on. Korean doesn't read a lot of books today. Korea can be strong when people have more knowledge than other country's people. We don't have oil, and natural resources. The power comes from knowledge of people.And knowledge comes from reading many books. If publisher who deals with classic books translates many diffrent classic, more people can meet a great knowledge of the author. Unlike in Japan, Korea didn't translate lots of classic books. (continued...)
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[이름],
You have a wonderful thought but I think you forgot the condition of the question. It says in the question that you can not use the money to yourself, family and friends. I know your intention is to support your father\'s book and I think, that is a wonderful thing to do to your father. I hope you can have the money so that you can support him financially. But for now, you can give him your moral support. I wish to read that book someday.
T.Sheela
But books were distributed only one thousands to the public.
>> There were one thousand copies of the book that were distributed to the public.
Because he didn\'t have lots of money to publish it.
>> Correct!
So If I gave him about 0.3 million dollars, he would invest it to his book, so publisher could advertise the book in the newspaper or in the subway.
>> Correct!
And of course he can distribute many books of it.
>>And of course, he can distribute a lot of books from it.
And it will be sold more than before.
>> Correct!Third, I wanna give 0.7 million dollars to publisher who deals with classic books like Kant, Rawls, Socratas and so on.
>> Thirdly, I wanna give 0.7 million dollars to the publishers who deals with classical books like Kant, Rawls, Socratas and so on.
Korean doesn\'t read a lot of books today.
>> Correct!
Korea can be strong when people have more knowledge than other country\'s people.
>> Korea can be a strong country, if only people have more knowledge than the other country\'s people.
We don\'t have oil and natural resources.
>> Correct!
The power comes from knowledge of people.
>> The power comes from the knowledge of the people.
And knowledge comes from reading many books.
>> Correct!
If publisher who deals with classic books translates many diffrent classic, more people can meet a great knowledge of the author.
>>If publishers who deals with classical books translates many diffrent classical books, more people can meet a great knowledge from the author.
>>If publishers who deals with classical books translates many diffrent classical books, more people can have a great knowledge from the author.
Unlike in Japan, Korea didn\'t translate lots of classic books.
>> Correct!
(continued...)
>>(To be continued..)
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