Money!!!

Saving money is very important things in our life.We study hard to success in the social and recieve money to live! I think money is important because it can make our life happy and more comfortable.With money we can eat food and buy clothes. The other reason is because i feel proud of myself to have lots of money.That is the reason why i like to have lots of money...

Hello! Thanks for sending another composition. I hope we would both get rich in the future!! Haha. So you should study hard, okay? Keep doing a good job with your studies. Aim high and shoot hard! We can both form a millionaire\'s club in the future! Haha (-^o^-) Anyway, for now, keep being happy and keep being appreciative of the blessings that you have. ~Karen (-^o^-)   Saving money is very important things in our life. >> Saving money is a very important thing in our life. We study hard to success in the social and recieve money to live! >> We study hard to succeed in the society and to receive money in order to live.  I think money is important because it can make our life happy and more comfortable. >> Correct! ^^, With money we can eat food and buy clothes. >> Correct grammar! But please make use of a comma [ ,] to divide your phrases. >> With money, we can eat food and buy clothes. (^o^)  The other reason is because i feel proud of myself to have lots of money. >> The other reason is that I would feel proud of myself if I would have lots of money. That is the reason why i like to have lots of money... >> Those are the reasons why I\'d like to have lots of money.