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Korean parents are spending big money not to develop for children\'s abundant life but to win in the competition with others.
So there is not to have limitation or maxium.
Unfortunately, they invest big money for private iinstitutionn, always suffer from anxiety and worry.
It\'s a kind of social and collective disease of Korean.
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Hi Ms. [이름]!
It is alarming for some students especially if their goal in life is not to compete academically but in other areas of their lives. Also for those who cannot afford to send their children in private institutions then there will be a bigger gap in the society in the future
See you later :)
Aki~
Korean parents are spending big money not to develop for children\'s abundant life but to win in the competition with others.
>>> CORRECT!
So there is not to have limitation or maxium.
>>> So there is no limitation or maximum.
Unfortunately, they invest big money for private iinstitutionn, always suffer from anxiety and worry.
>>> Unfortunately, they invest big money in private institutions, and they always suffer from anxiety and worry.
It\'s a kind of social and collective disease of Korean.
>>> It\'s a kind of social and collective disease among Koreans
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