Money
학생이 쓴 원문
Money is not a root of evil.Because,money make people feel happy.and the reason that money is root of evil is people`s mind that they don`t want to divide something.
강사 첨삭
Hello, David! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Money is not a root of evil.
>>> Money is not the root of all evil.
Because,money make people feel happy.
>>> Because money makes people feel happy.
and the reason that money is root of evil is people`s mind that they don`t want to divide something.
>>> The reason that money is the root of evil is that people become greedy for it.
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