Money
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I think Yes. We must spend for everything. Example, we must spend money for buy food, buy toy.
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I think Yes.
>> I think money is really important.
We must spend for everything.
>> We use our money to buy everything that we need.
Example, we must spend money for buy food, buy toy.
>> For example, we must use our money to buy food and even toys.
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