Money

'Money' Money is important thing during our life because we have to eat something, to do what they want and to buy some clothes.... Although it isn't the best important things, we need to earn more money. Most people might believe that much money can make a life of luxury to us. Maybe I also agree. But it just help to enjoy material wealth. TV drama may show side of life, most of rich who is main charater of drama are alone and not happy. Maybe money cann't fill happy to mind or soul. But if you cann't eat anything and don't have your own house, how can you be happy? So we need the minimum amount of money for keeping our life. But I want to earn a lot of money. hahaha. Oh! I wish I want to win the first prize in the lottery.

Sir [이름], hello! Indeed, without money, we cannot speak with each other, we cannot buy what we want, and a whole lot more that money can buy. But there are more important things in life more than money like family, wealth, among others. So, I agree with you that we should really like money, but first, we ought to work the hardest everyday. So thanks for working hard in making this essay. You did a good job! Keep writing Sir [이름]. See you! --T. Donna 'Money'Money is important thing during our life because we have to eat something, to do what they wantand to buy some clothes.... >> Money is an important thing to our lives because we have to eat something, do what we wantand buy some clothes.Although it isn't the best important things, we need to earn more money. >> Although it isn't the best important thing, we need to earn more money.Most people might believe that much money can make a life of luxury to us. >> Most people might believe that much money can make a life of luxury to them.Maybe I also agree. But it just help to enjoy material wealth. >> Maybe I also agree but it just helps to enjoy material wealth.TV drama may show side of life, most of rich who is main charater of drama are alone and not happy. >> TV drama may show the side of life, most of rich men who are the main characters of drama are alone and not happy.Maybe money cann't fill happy to mind or soul. >> Maybe money cannot fill in happiness to the mind or soul.But if you cann't eat anything and don't have your own house, how can you be happy? >> Correct! (ONLY: can’t OR cannot/ can not)So we need the minimum amount of money for keeping our life. >> So we need the minimum amount of money for keeping our lives.But I want to earn a lot of money. hahaha. >> Correct! (ONLY: …money, hahaha…)Oh! I wish I want to win the first prize in the lottery. >> Oh! I want to win the first prize in the lottery./I wish to win the first prize in the lottery.