money

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In my opinion older people have to spend their money on themselves.

>>In my opinion, older people have to spend their money on themselves.
their money can use for their life styli and better life.

>>Their money can be use for their life style and for them to have better life.
if their children grew up they can own their money.

>>If their children grow up they can have their own money.
>>OR: If their children grow up they can have money on their own.
also they will save up the money for themselves.
>>They will also save the money up for themselves.
if people just save up money their children might not work and have independent .
>>If people just save money up for their children might not work and have independence.
of cause if people\'s children have bad happen people can help them using money but they don’t need save money for their children inheritance.

>>Of course, if people\'s children have bad happening, people can help themselves by using their money but they don\'t need save money for their children\'s inheritance.

>>Of course, if people\'s children face misfortunes or accident, people can help themselves by using their money but they don\'t need save money for their children\'s inheritance.
it would make bed situation that your children quarrel over the inheritance.

>>It would their children quarrel over the inheritance.
>>It would be possible that their children will quarrel over their inheritance.